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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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What impedes our hands from touch? What impedes together rain? What impedes our lingered hush? What impedes the squall to break? What erodes our returned dreams? Entropy turned slow to vow? What keeps garnet stone in glass? Crimson facets left, my love. What words then are hoisted high, bleeding hues out of the sky? What gestures turn out a lie? From your lips, no kiss; just why. [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (10-04-2002 12:23 PM).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
You're an excellent writer....alot of thought goes into your work.. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you, Toe. I appreciate that.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Excuse me, I thought this was going to be a poem on erectile dysfunction, then I realized this is about impedence, not impotence! tehe Nothing impedes your ability to write, and thank goodness for that! EA |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Another beautiful write, Mikey, Enjoyed... ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you both. It's not exactly a fun read ... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
No, Mike. Not fun. But a wonder, nonetheless. ~Ed |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Mike, you have an excellent way with words. You get your point across very nicely. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Ethel |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
danger this poem causes sighs and thousand-mile stares too well |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Mikey - does your mind ever just take a break? Amazing skill you have with words. Enjoyed this. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yanno, EarthAngel? I wish someone would have cleared it with me, before that particular malady, was monikered ED Sheesh, ~Ed |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I'm glad you all enjoyeda quite unenjoyable event. |
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