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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-10-04 12:20 PM

What impedes our hands from touch?
What impedes together rain?
What impedes our lingered hush?
What impedes the squall to break?

What erodes our returned dreams?
Entropy turned slow to vow?
What keeps garnet stone in glass?
Crimson facets left, my love.

What words then are hoisted high,
bleeding hues out of the sky?
What gestures turn out a lie?
From your lips, no kiss; just why.

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (10-04-2002 12:23 PM).]

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

1 posted 2002-10-04 12:25 PM

You're an excellent writer....alot of thought goes into your work..

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-10-04 12:41 PM

Thank you, Toe. I appreciate that.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-10-04 12:58 PM

Excuse me, I thought this was going to be a poem on erectile dysfunction, then I realized this is about impedence, not impotence! tehe

Nothing impedes your ability to write, and thank goodness for that!

EA

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

4 posted 2002-10-04 01:04 PM

Another beautiful write, Mikey, Enjoyed...

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-10-04 03:34 PM

Thank you both.

It's not exactly a fun read ...

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

6 posted 2002-10-05 11:44 PM

No, Mike. Not fun. But a wonder, nonetheless.

~Ed

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2002-10-05 11:49 PM

Mike, you have an excellent way with words. You get your point across very nicely. Thanks for sharing.

Best wishes,
Ethel

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

8 posted 2002-10-06 11:54 AM

danger
this poem causes
sighs
and thousand-mile stares
too well

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2002-10-06 11:58 AM

Mikey - does your mind ever just take a break? Amazing skill you have with words. Enjoyed this. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

10 posted 2002-10-06 12:22 PM

Yanno, EarthAngel?
I wish someone would have cleared it with me,
before that particular malady,
was monikered
ED

Sheesh,
~Ed

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

11 posted 2002-10-06 02:24 PM

I'm glad you all enjoyed
a quite unenjoyable event.

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