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I miss you so much
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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I miss the flames you put around me. I miss the sky you hang above me. I miss the sense you offer to me. I miss the songs you write to hold me. I miss the street you walk on with me. I miss the verse you sing -- you told me just one more night, or 72 years to taste your eyes, their forming tears. [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (08-19-2002 06:18 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BSquirrel~ Beautifully sad ... or sadly beautiful~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
to taste your eyes, their forming tears. ============================= and I've missed your poetry... (so it was only a couple days)  If all the tear drops went to heaven |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I miss the verse you sing -- you told me just one more night, or 72 years to taste your eyes, their forming tears. Beautiful words, Mr.Squirrel... Did you find the inspiration in my attic? On some of the nesting material? Only kidding  I really loved it.  ~ hugs and acornsLyra |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
No critique here, only a smile and a nicely done.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*smiling here as well Mikey* Very beautifully said.... ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
bsquirrel-Extremely touching, nicely done. Hugs. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I miss reading your poetry when I am away for too long. Lovely read. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Michael, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you but know love will always find a way as I'm sure she will return! (sigh) This is achingly gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
As one of the last people to read things (oops, look what sleeping will do ), I've still gotta say very beautiful, sorta owy, poem.Love you, baby o' mine. Miss you with all the tragedy that only a goth can. Though I am keeping occupied with Jeff Martin and th' others from Tea Party.  Lovely baby. Ne'er go to Florida again, k? K. North is your object, not south. i'll be waiting for you |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
WaaaaaaaaaaW dear bsquirrel,,, U know I miss someone very close to me like u do so I really feel it...soooo sensitive words.... Sooo Lovely Good luck Smile Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks everyone, for readin' and enjoyin'. And Lori, I was in Florida 'cause that's where I had to be on business -- it wasn't by choice.  |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
yer makin me sad with this stuff, Mike! Nice one!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very nice one Mike. Well done. No critiques....just well done. somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
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