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Phantasm
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Phantasm |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England 
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The lavender sky swirls about, in & out these pristine bellows, that shuffle their impenetrable shades within; Anxiety is flipping the horizon on its back & terror’s flinging the sphere on edge. There’s a trail of something shifting, it’s trailing the dying day and drifting concealed, on the bridge of reason. All the shadows in the dream cage, shiver, flicking free, familiar fears, and turning inward, shielding- Delirium unstitches his silhouettes to cast an echo, that strikes the night. Phantasm, crawls along the walls of horror to slide behind the mask of slumber, & rest its scream amongst, the breath of sleep. S-G-K© |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
THIS WAS A PHANTASY ....kinda puts a chill up my spine.. i give it a 10 out of 10. 11! A MILLION |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Is there safety in slumber? Here's to a right side up dawn and hope. Enjoyed (always do) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Samantha, You paint with bold colors and a palette knife. Enjoyed |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
oo wow. this is so deliciously good. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Wow, oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautifully haunting, sweet friend, in your opera of words you sure summon the phantasm, I love it, it is so great to see you again, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sam, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-03-2002 07:34 PM).] |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
OK, Wanna know what gave ME the chills? Three days ago, I decided I was going to write about PHANTASM, and even title it the same. How strange is THAT?!  OK, on to your poem. I really enjoyed reading this. (for more reasons than the above) And to tell you the truth, I'm sure you did a MUCH better job than I would have. Wonderful work Samantha! ~Sheri |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful haunting write here Samantha! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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