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Sinful_Steph
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0 posted 2002-10-03 12:08 PM



Intermittent Thought

We’ve been together for a while
Over two years have passed
I don’t know about you
But I want this to last

Over the following couple of years
My feelings have grown strong
I ache for your company
For you to stay so long

I crave the warmth of your body
Laying next to me
I yearn for your touch
That’s not hard to see

I pine for the old days
When your lips touched mine
Longing to tell you how I feel
Just desperate for a sign

An indication about the way you feel
Instead of these conflicting clues
Either you care or you don’t
It has to be one of the two

We are no longer affectionate
And that decision was yours
I think that you’re worried
Of opening new doors

Doors you can’t shut
Because emotions we will share
You will have no alternative
But to acknowledge that you care

If that’s not the case
And for me you don’t care
I will let you go
Because that is what’s fair

It’s essential to be free
To attain a love that’s true
And it’s crucial to move on
And start each life anew

Memories will linger
And every now and then will stir
We can each reminisce
About the way that we were

Memories will transform
As time goes on
Unimportant details diminish
Until they are gone

Leaving us with nothing
But an intermittent thought
About a special individual
Of whom we have forgot

[This message has been edited by Sinful_Steph (10-04-2002 12:33 PM).]

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RSWells
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1 posted 2002-10-03 12:46 PM


This is good. If its intended isn't moved by it than the decision (seemingly half made) may have to be implemented. From heaven to the current purgatory to a temporary hell. Ain't life grand? Keep writing, it helps.
Moonlight Romeo
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2 posted 2002-10-03 12:50 PM


Hello.  

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us, and welcome to Passions in Poetry.  I know that you will enjoy your time here.  We look forward to seeing more of your work.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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3 posted 2002-10-03 12:52 PM


Well done. Welcome to Passions!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-10-03 12:54 PM


Hi Steph!
Welcome to Passions!
Very nicely penned first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Waving a hand from Windsor, and sending hugs up the 401, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

SEA
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5 posted 2002-10-03 12:59 PM


Welcome! this is so full of emotions, and feelings I can relate to. I hope you give this to him, let him know, and I hope it all works out!
Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2002-10-03 01:04 PM


"Memories will transform
As time goes on
Unimportant details diminish
Until they are gone


Leaving us with nothing
But an intermittent thought
About a special individual
Of whom we have forgot"




(smiles) Yay!!! Oh my gosh, this is such a wonderfully heartfelt debut, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! Always cherish these memories and share them to us all through your wonderful words as we are all blessed to be your friends! Welcome to Passions, sweet Stephanie, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and be sure to check your E-mail for a very special greeting! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stephanie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-03-2002 01:12 PM).]

Sunshine
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7 posted 2002-10-03 02:59 PM



Well I see nothing sinful about this, Stephanie, so just let me wish you a Welcome to Passions, and I hope you look around, find yourself in a new poet home, and have fun.  If you have any questions, don't hesitate to let any of the moderators know about it, okay?

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

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8 posted 2002-10-03 03:50 PM


Welcome. The love journey isn't always roses and wine, but aren't you glad you made it anyway? I look forward to reading more from you, Stephanie.
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2002-10-03 03:58 PM


Sinful
Welcome and a very nice first post. Enjoyed.

Sinful_Steph
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10 posted 2002-10-03 10:30 PM


RSWells, Moonlight, Nightshade, Enchantress, SEA, Mistletoe Angel, Sunshine, Midnitesun, Symour Tabin....I would like to thank all of you for your encouraging words.  I will be posting more poetry I have written, and I'm sure being a part of passions will inspire me to try new things and write more.  I look forward to seeing you all again.

Stephanie

"Love me little, Love me long, Is the burden of my song" - Robert Herrick

[This message has been edited by Sinful_Steph (10-04-2002 12:30 PM).]

Sinful_Steph
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Toronto, Ontario (Canada)
11 posted 2002-10-04 12:42 PM


Your poetry I love to read
It's such an inspiration
I will continue to write
About my dreams and aspirations

For all to get to know me
And for what it is that I care
I will continue to write
I will continue to share.



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