Open Poetry #22 |
Intermittent Thought ( This is the first time I've shared my poetry) |
Sinful_Steph Junior Member
since 2002-10-03
Posts 35Toronto, Ontario (Canada) |
Intermittent Thought We’ve been together for a while Over two years have passed I don’t know about you But I want this to last Over the following couple of years My feelings have grown strong I ache for your company For you to stay so long I crave the warmth of your body Laying next to me I yearn for your touch That’s not hard to see I pine for the old days When your lips touched mine Longing to tell you how I feel Just desperate for a sign An indication about the way you feel Instead of these conflicting clues Either you care or you don’t It has to be one of the two We are no longer affectionate And that decision was yours I think that you’re worried Of opening new doors Doors you can’t shut Because emotions we will share You will have no alternative But to acknowledge that you care If that’s not the case And for me you don’t care I will let you go Because that is what’s fair It’s essential to be free To attain a love that’s true And it’s crucial to move on And start each life anew Memories will linger And every now and then will stir We can each reminisce About the way that we were Memories will transform As time goes on Unimportant details diminish Until they are gone Leaving us with nothing But an intermittent thought About a special individual Of whom we have forgot [This message has been edited by Sinful_Steph (10-04-2002 12:33 PM).] |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
This is good. If its intended isn't moved by it than the decision (seemingly half made) may have to be implemented. From heaven to the current purgatory to a temporary hell. Ain't life grand? Keep writing, it helps. |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Hello. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us, and welcome to Passions in Poetry. I know that you will enjoy your time here. We look forward to seeing more of your work. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well done. Welcome to Passions!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Steph! Welcome to Passions! Very nicely penned first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Waving a hand from Windsor, and sending hugs up the 401, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome! this is so full of emotions, and feelings I can relate to. I hope you give this to him, let him know, and I hope it all works out! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Memories will transform As time goes on Unimportant details diminish Until they are gone Leaving us with nothing But an intermittent thought About a special individual Of whom we have forgot" (smiles) Yay!!! Oh my gosh, this is such a wonderfully heartfelt debut, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! Always cherish these memories and share them to us all through your wonderful words as we are all blessed to be your friends! Welcome to Passions, sweet Stephanie, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and be sure to check your E-mail for a very special greeting! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stephanie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-03-2002 01:12 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well I see nothing sinful about this, Stephanie, so just let me wish you a Welcome to Passions, and I hope you look around, find yourself in a new poet home, and have fun. If you have any questions, don't hesitate to let any of the moderators know about it, okay? Karilea |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome. The love journey isn't always roses and wine, but aren't you glad you made it anyway? I look forward to reading more from you, Stephanie. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sinful Welcome and a very nice first post. Enjoyed. |
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Sinful_Steph Junior Member
since 2002-10-03
Posts 35Toronto, Ontario (Canada) |
RSWells, Moonlight, Nightshade, Enchantress, SEA, Mistletoe Angel, Sunshine, Midnitesun, Symour Tabin....I would like to thank all of you for your encouraging words. I will be posting more poetry I have written, and I'm sure being a part of passions will inspire me to try new things and write more. I look forward to seeing you all again. Stephanie "Love me little, Love me long, Is the burden of my song" - Robert Herrick [This message has been edited by Sinful_Steph (10-04-2002 12:30 PM).] |
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Sinful_Steph Junior Member
since 2002-10-03
Posts 35Toronto, Ontario (Canada) |
Your poetry I love to read It's such an inspiration I will continue to write About my dreams and aspirations For all to get to know me And for what it is that I care I will continue to write I will continue to share. |
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