Open Poetry #22 |
Crossing Bridges Yet Unmade |
SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Steeping deep In midnight pools Of restless thought Where two souls Are dreamless sought Bound by Fate’s Turn of event This sleepless night Together spent Crossing bridges Yet unmade In mind’s eye Go unafraid Here, let hearts And souls combine Mingle thoughts Intertwine…. Touch that ever Shall transcend Until forever Comes to an end ~SEA~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sue, the more I read from you.. the more I realize how much you have been missed here. Wonderful writing...just superb. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Susan, I love this, sweet friend, this is soooooo beautiful, may you and your love cross into eternity's forever always, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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FuzzyFrazzledFraggle Member
since 2002-09-20
Posts 155Fraggle Rock |
*again jaw drops to the floor, quickly picks up and walks out the door* dang!!! Wonderful you just don't know!! no yeah seriously considered yourself fuzzed Consider yourself fuzzed |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Nancy~ awww, you are the best, thank you Noah~ big smiles and warm hugs to you, thank you Fuzzy~ wow! cool! thanks a bunch |
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fishop Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 79ohio |
love the art and the pic. Tom |
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DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
Wow, and I thought my soul was flowing. Thank you for giving this. "If there is any doubt about it there is no doubt about it." Linnie Stanton |
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Rosalind Palafox
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MemberPosts 88 |
So these two souls got a chance to be together for the night once again, how sweet and special is that??? It was their fate that led them there together once more. Kinda reminds me of the movie Ghost. i liked this poem. havent been here a long while and this poem was welcoming. thanks for the read. "Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I love the picture and your words fit it perfectly. Wonderful write. I am so glad you have returned. Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Susan, While looking at the eye, the eye looks back. Loved this. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sea You captured the souls touch, with perfect rhythm. Beautiful! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done my friend... as always a touch of words that touch deep. |
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Tara Simms Hall Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87South Carolina |
Sea, this is why you are one of my favorite poets to read. Absolutely wonderful writing. But from you, I would expect no less! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
You know I love this one. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - you're writings are just, well just, h'mmmm, well just though provoking. Me hopes though that forever is forever... BC |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tom~ thank you! Don~ thank you for the wow, very cool Rosalind~ yes! and thank you Marti~ that is very sweet of you thank you! Mike~ you are awesome, thanks Martie~ thank you for reading and liking, that means a lot to me! Ron~ thank you Tara~ thank you!! Michael~ thank you dear friend BC~ me too, thanks! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, I like your reason for a sleepless night much better! Nice write. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you Larry |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Susan This was absolutely beautiful and it is so nice to be able to read your words once again. I'm sure you have been missed by many and I hope all is well with you. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you Sue, and yes, things with me are great! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sea, Have not been around much and this is such a awesome poem to start my visit off, wow hope to see more beauty's like this. Love, Cerenity |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello, Sea. This is very, very touching. I liked it so much. Thank you for sharing your poetry. Love, Ethel....garysgirl |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Touch that ever Shall transcend Until forever Comes to an end" And the tides of the SEA wash over us once again with tender thoughts. Thank you, Susan, for sharing your heart. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Once again you share a beauty with us....enjoyed it very very much ((hugs)) Charisma |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Touch that ever Shall transcend Until forever Comes to an end Beautifully expressed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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