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Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

0 posted 2002-10-02 09:50 PM

Bend me easy with soothing smiles
Touch me softly when we kiss
Atrophy set in so long ago
My heart isn't use to this

Wash gently upon me, the waves of warm love
Please don't wash away my shores
If you should one day decide to retreat
Leave gently, my glass heart emplores

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-10-02 09:52 PM

Knowing that sand
stems forth glass...
I loved the metaphors, and you should know...

I don't use the word "love" often...

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

2 posted 2002-10-02 09:56 PM

Karilea,

Thanks for the compliment! I read your prose piece, and am working on a reply. I didn't want to just "drop one off". It is more deserving than that.

Kris

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-10-02 10:00 PM

Kris, with all honesty, this is a beauty. Your way with words, images, metaphors, rhythm.... This is ooo la la lovely.

Excuse me while I go back and experience it again!

Linda

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-10-02 10:03 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Kristopher, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, and I wish for this love never to break and remain as strong and lustrous as a diamond! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a ebautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

FuzzyFrazzledFraggle
Member

since 2002-09-20

Posts 155
Fraggle Rock

5 posted 2002-10-02 10:06 PM

I'm with Mistletoe..

I'm feeling a bit damp atm..my fuzz getting wet from the tears I've shed today..heartfelt..

Consider yourself fuzzed

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2002-10-02 10:21 PM

A sunrise at high tide!
ThisDiamond

fishop
Member

since 2002-09-13

Posts 79
ohio

7 posted 2002-10-02 10:21 PM

When in love, a gentle retreat can be more shattering then a slammed window. Very nice piece.

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