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Open Poetry #22

His Mothers Eye's

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2002-08-19 03:39 PM

He has his mothers eyes
and the beauty the hold remind me
of yesterdays in a field of dreams
that collapse my fervant soul.
I feel thise eyes pierce
my hollowed heart, leaping into
faith that I cannot muster,
still holding on to prayer.
In a weakend state of fury,
I only wish to hold her
again so I can feel the stars
laugh at my simple joy's.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-08-19 04:24 PM

Touching...though I think the stars would
smile at your simple joys...far more than
they would ever laugh...

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-08-19 07:20 PM

MichaelG~
Longingly lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

3 posted 2002-08-20 12:29 PM

Wonderful....as usual.

It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen.

Marina Crossley

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

4 posted 2002-08-22 10:45 AM

That is beautiful MG.........
As Always
Jenn E

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