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iluvhellokitty21
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since 2002-09-24
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0 posted 2002-10-02 05:14 PM


wrinkled fingers interlock

as they walk hand in hand


where they have walked so many times


in different seasons


in different trials


in the happy times and the sad


they have walked close together


all the while becoming one


the oneness that is craved by so many


but found by so few


how lucky are these two


within the pure rapture of a walk


a walk as one


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Daniel van Vliet
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1 posted 2002-10-02 06:16 PM


.... nice thoughts here.
garysgirl
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2 posted 2002-10-03 02:34 AM


I love the thoughts in your poem. It sounds like my parents in their walk of life all these many years.
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