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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2002-10-01 11:48 PM




In the amalgamation
The blending of two
Under soft sky melting
Twilight hue
Love that is boundless
Sacred in God’s view
Here, we hold on
Keeping the me and the you

In the promising
Foreverly bound
Such peace in knowing
This love we’ve found
Ever in faith
Our souls resound
Hands held together
Feet on solid ground

In the understanding
What we have is rare
~Remaining steady~
While other’s despair
Tending our garden
With tenacious care
So grateful,
For this love we share

~SEA~

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1 posted 2002-10-01 11:50 PM


SEA - when one shares a deep love, it's to be cherished and held close...

BC

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2 posted 2002-10-01 11:55 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is beautiful, and may this beautiful love always be cherished and nurtured just like a child to your golden heart! (kiss on cheek) This is special, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-10-01 11:59 PM


Susan,
Awww, I liked that. Think I'll go see if I can find a bunny.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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4 posted 2002-10-02 12:18 PM


I'm glad you have someone so special in your life, for you're a very special lady.  
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5 posted 2002-10-02 01:20 AM


such love inspires faith and hope in others - I enjoyed your poem very much
Tracey
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6 posted 2002-10-02 07:24 AM


So nice to have you back Susan, with your calm, serene words of love. This seems to gently whisper the devotion of two lovers. Lovely.

You can never win or lose
If you don't
Run the race

Psychedelic Furs - Love My Way

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7 posted 2002-10-02 08:35 AM


In the promising
Foreverly bound
Such peace in knowing
This love we’ve found
Ever in faith
Our souls resound
Hands held together
Feet on solid ground
=================================
SHES BAAAAAAAAAACK!!!
a belated mothy welcome back to the blue pages Sea-girlie, Ive been gone for a bit myself.. still trying to catch up.
So great to read such contentment in your words...and that pic is amazing.

In the space between now and then
I lost the fire, lost a friend
and Ill never be the same again
Still, I believe in the innocence
we gave away.

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The heart of you
8 posted 2002-10-02 09:00 AM


A shared love can lead to a love ever after.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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9 posted 2002-10-02 09:28 AM


Simply beautiful Sue...just beautiful!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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just out of reach
10 posted 2002-10-02 09:41 AM


Tender words and beautiful pic!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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11 posted 2002-10-02 12:12 PM


Yes, quite beautiful.
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12 posted 2002-10-02 03:58 PM


Susan, beautiful picture, beautiful words. Gosh, I really have missed reading you.

Hugs, Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

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