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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-10-01 09:42 PM


“UNTIL THE MORROW”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Meet me tonight in the light of a moonbeam,
walk with me to the tree in the meadow,
hold me tight in your delicate embrace,
love of mine you will have past tomorrow…

Perhaps slow dance with me close to you,
to a melody singing through the leaves,
eyes closed, as I bathe in your fragrance,
magical, the music inside us softly weaves…

I ask you to join me in my castle in the sky,
lie with me on the silk of feathered pillows,
taste me, touch my lips until the morrow,
as I whisper in your ear of gentle rainbows…
~~~~

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2002-10-01 09:58 PM


magical, the music inside us softly weaves…

I ask you to join me in my castle in the sky,
lie with me on the silk of feathered pillows,
taste me, touch my lips until the morrow,
as I whisper in your ear of gentle rainbows…
-------------------------------------------
Oh dang!  Oh yes!!  Wonderful Bill.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

SEA
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2 posted 2002-10-01 10:07 PM


"Meet me tonight in the light of a moonbeam,
walk with me to the tree in the meadow,"

"Perhaps slow dance with me close to you,
to a melody singing through the leaves,
eyes closed, as I bathe in your fragrance,
magical, the music inside us softly weaves…"


*SIGH*
this is so romantic

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2002-10-01 10:18 PM


Nancy - thank you once again for reading one of my poems, and all of the others you have read. I'm glad you liked this write, it means a lot...

SEA - thank you SEA, thank you for stopping by for a read...

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-10-01 10:18 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, is this the beautiful poem of moonlight rainbows you were telling me about yesterday? (big hugggsssss) This is soooooo beautifully romantic, sweet friend, I think you truly are our resident Romeo in blue suede shoes, this rocks, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

WhileIWasGone
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5 posted 2002-10-01 10:58 PM


Very beautiful work....enjoyed very much.

DeaDiAmore

FuzzyFrazzledFraggle
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6 posted 2002-10-01 10:59 PM


aww yes beautiful, magical..*sigh* loved this obviously!

Consider yourself fuzzed

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2002-10-01 11:07 PM


Noah - once again your kind words touch me, thank you very much. This isn't the one I told you about but I have just completed it tonight...

WhileIWasGone - thank you for coming by for a read...

FuzzyFrazzledFraggle - I consider myself fuzzed by the Fuzzy Frazzled Fraggle. And it feels, well, it feels rather nice...



Earth Angel
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8 posted 2002-10-02 01:50 PM


Tell me which moonbeam, and I'll meet you under it!---You're doing it to me again!

~ Lead the way to the tree in the meadow! ~

EA

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9 posted 2002-10-02 03:12 PM


The only thing sweeter than parting is coming back together.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2002-10-02 03:37 PM


Bill,
If that don't get them I dont know what will, enjoyed.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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11 posted 2002-10-02 03:45 PM


Oh BC this is just so magical and musical. Love it to pieces.

'... I ask you to join me in my castle in the sky,
lie with me on the silk of feathered pillows, ...'    Ahhhhhhh.....

Such soft words....hugs, Marti

Muys
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12 posted 2002-10-02 03:54 PM


Í enjoyed it Bill Charles
So much memorys
Thank you
Muys

nakdthoughts
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13 posted 2002-10-02 08:26 PM


You are filled with a rainbow of gentle words, Bill

As Always,
M


brian madden
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14 posted 2002-10-02 08:29 PM


This is wonderful Bill, beautiful images very tender.

El riesgo vive siempre!

Bill Charles
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15 posted 2002-10-02 08:52 PM


Earth Angel - the moonbeam is the one you'll see tonight, I've picked it out. And the tree in the meadow is already reserved, meet you there...

Moonlight Romeo - and being together is the best of it all. Thank you for your reply...

Seymour - I've got my fingers and toes crossed that it will. Thank you my friend...

NewEnglandlazurlu - magic and musical, I'm glad you like it to pieces...

Muys - thank you for stopping by, and I'm glad it brought pleasant memories...

nakdthoughts - a'hhh my dear one, thank you for your warm thoughts...

brian - tender are thoughts of a beautiful woman... Thank you for your reply...

fishop
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16 posted 2002-10-02 09:11 PM


What more can be said.  It is beautiful.  I for one can get weak knees from a slow dance mixed with a great fragrance.  Memories memories memories.  Old memories.
Ariana
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17 posted 2002-10-02 09:26 PM


BC
The next time I see a moonbeam racing across the sky I will be thinking of you.  Very romantic writing.

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