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SEA
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0 posted 2002-10-01 03:34 PM


Words fail me when I try to explain…..instead let me touch you, there again
I’ll whisper with my fingertips……I’ll scream so softly, with my lips
Recite to you tactile poetry……. Convey my thoughts, intimately
Describe to you with hips in sway…….a thousand love letters, in physical display


Conversation held in eyes……only sound, our muffled sighs
Knowledge forms from heated skin……..imparting desires kept within
Language barriers now quite broken……you understand my devotion
Communicating through touch and feel…….leaving no doubts, my love is real


~SEA~

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1 posted 2002-10-01 03:37 PM



There's my SEA...
rolling with the waves...

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2 posted 2002-10-01 03:39 PM


Dang girl.... this one just oozes sensuality... and I loved it!
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3 posted 2002-10-01 03:46 PM


susan,

this was so soft and sensual...you leave
me with a smile but then again your poetry
often does! this is just beautiful hon.

take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--if you chase it, it will surely fly away...instead hold it close to your heart and realise it is fragile...then watch as it

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4 posted 2002-10-01 03:48 PM


Ah, it is good to have you back here, Susan.
Toerag
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5 posted 2002-10-01 03:52 PM


Really nice SEA....if I wouldda titled a poem with this...NAN would come back and delete it thinking I was writing about Balladeer's brains.....
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6 posted 2002-10-01 04:08 PM


There is a language of fingertips, of eyes, of breath...and you've described it well in this most sensual poem.

~Michael Auguste~
The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star,

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7 posted 2002-10-01 04:32 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, such beautiful romance always fills your words, I LOVE IT, yay, this is beautifully "touching", we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2002-10-01 09:09 PM


This leaves me speachless my dear, a bit short of breath as well...

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



SEA
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9 posted 2002-10-01 09:38 PM


thank you all for the great replies!!
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10 posted 2002-10-01 11:16 PM


SEA - you're just amazing the way you write...

BC

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11 posted 2002-10-01 11:19 PM


beautifully penned!!

Consider yourself fuzzed

Martie
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12 posted 2002-10-01 11:21 PM


Sea

Sensual, yet so gracefully done!

Beki
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13 posted 2002-10-02 01:22 AM


Now that is what I call communication! Wonderful poem, irresistable entreaty!
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14 posted 2002-10-02 02:27 AM


Sunshine,
More like tidal waves!

Susan,
Oh yeah!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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15 posted 2002-10-02 10:07 AM


Nicely done-I can feel it.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

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