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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Words fail me when I try to explain…..instead let me touch you, there again I’ll whisper with my fingertips……I’ll scream so softly, with my lips Recite to you tactile poetry……. Convey my thoughts, intimately Describe to you with hips in sway…….a thousand love letters, in physical display Conversation held in eyes……only sound, our muffled sighs Knowledge forms from heated skin……..imparting desires kept within Language barriers now quite broken……you understand my devotion Communicating through touch and feel…….leaving no doubts, my love is real ~SEA~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There's my SEA... rolling with the waves... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Dang girl.... this one just oozes sensuality... and I loved it! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
susan, this was so soft and sensual...you leave me with a smile but then again your poetry often does! this is just beautiful hon. take care. amy  "love is like a butterfly--if you chase it, it will surely fly away...instead hold it close to your heart and realise it is fragile...then watch as it |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ah, it is good to have you back here, Susan. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Really nice SEA....if I wouldda titled a poem with this...NAN would come back and delete it thinking I was writing about Balladeer's brains..... |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
There is a language of fingertips, of eyes, of breath...and you've described it well in this most sensual poem.  ~Michael Auguste~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, such beautiful romance always fills your words, I LOVE IT, yay, this is beautifully "touching", we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
This leaves me speachless my dear, a bit short of breath as well...  Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all for the great replies!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - you're just amazing the way you write... BC |
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FuzzyFrazzledFraggle Member
since 2002-09-20
Posts 155Fraggle Rock |
beautifully penned!! Consider yourself fuzzed |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sea Sensual, yet so gracefully done! |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Now that is what I call communication! Wonderful poem, irresistable entreaty! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sunshine, More like tidal waves!  Susan, Oh yeah! If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Nicely done-I can feel it. Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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