Open Poetry #22 |
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Baluba |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
To be read preferably with a pair of very resonant bongos playing in the background. This is a boxer's [Baluba] manager speaking to another boxer's manager before a fight. When Baluba box, He box good. Baluba bad Understood? Baluba great Baluba bad Baluba dangerous When mad. Baluba? He got iron jaw When Baluba punch Baluba score Baluba dance Baluba weave Baluba make Yo mama grieve, Baluba? He come knock you out Baluba say Baluba shout and when he shout you best beware You best look out When Baluba stare. Baluba? He no talk too much Baluba break What Baluba touch And when he touch you best be gone cause when he touch the fight be done. So don't tell me Yo fighter glad To fight Baluba When Baluba mad Baluba here Fo yo fighter's crown. Ya better fear! Ya hea? You clown! [This message has been edited by Radrook (10-01-2002 02:25 AM).] |
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Krishankins![]()
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Unusual style! I like this one! Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...James |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ha ha ha ha! I loved it. |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Glad you all enjoyed it. I wrote this poem about twenty years ago. But I could not find the original which is somewhere in my apartment in some corner in some box I suppose along with hundreds of others poems written years ago. So I had to reconstruct it from memory. Thanks for the feedback! |
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