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brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland

0 posted 2002-09-30 06:10 PM


Another dreaded repost from some time last year, I was writing a sequel to this called "the return of brian the stripper" but it has evolved into a different beast.  
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In the ties of conquest
One word of bliss,
stray whispering lips
for a love-left listless.
Through cranks and cracks
the big bone
makes its scene
lumbering in little shacks.

Brian the stripper
Crawling naked up the walls
Place a dollar where you last left God.

Don't need an alibi
to taste the dance
or thread hairline trance.
Analgesic infants defy
A cradle credence unbroken
hard labour
For powdered saviour,
Mortuary poetry is last words spoken.

Brian the stripper
He is a coming
Through the door.

Don't drag the orchestra into this thing
Rattle those sticks, rattle those sticks
The sound is beautiful, its perfect!
The birthday party

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Miah
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2002-09-30 06:13 PM


Very cool write.  Thanks for the read.
brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
2 posted 2002-10-01 01:23 PM


Thanks Miah.


Don't drag the orchestra into this thing
Rattle those sticks, rattle those sticks
The sound is beautiful, its perfect!
The birthday party

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