Open Poetry #22 |
Coolness |
rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Stir, sweet silent mercy in cloud lingering light Swirl your heavy cream kiss into morn Wisp across my blank paper thoughts tilting wayfarer caresses of my own resolve I am weary of nothing though, grasp my sweater round Your gentle reminder nudging change into my wake Creative gestures begin to grace the stroke of time’s swift tick into another notice Leaves scurry quick, hiding first signs that coolness is more ahead than before |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A fine read, this cool morning. ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey reggie---where ya been? we've all missed you...your style is soft without being saccharine, m'friend, intelligent without being cold and analytical. (Have I told ya all of this before? Bet I have, but I'll type it every time if you stick around awhile! ) wonderful writer you. |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
There is something about coolness that brings people together. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Regina, I know this feeling so well and you describe the first signs of auumns cooldown here both inside and out! (kiss on cheek) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
always you race the page with thooughts and feelings I can wrap around me in some way... always a pleasure and a learning experience to read what it is you have to say.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Regina, where have you been?! We have missed you terribly here.. Welcome home dear poetess.... just in time to see the seasons change. ~Tight hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
rwood A darlen write and I'll go along with Serenity on this one. Missed you. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Regina So good to read you again, dear poet...you are always such a pleasure to read. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
What a way to end a block, and what a poem to signify! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Creative gestures begin to grace the stroke of time’s swift tick into another notice Leaves scurry quick, hiding first signs that coolness is more ahead than before very tender and beautifully written. Don't drag the orchestra into this thing |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Regina, I am so going to miss the warmth. Yet, this reminds me of how I enjoy all seasons. Curling up with a blanket, warm drink, fire and a good movie while the coolness settles in outside! ~Sheri |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...nudging change into my wake... better than Tiramisu, this is... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Regina This was absolutely beautiful. I have really missed reading your words and I hope all is well with you and yours. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Reg, I wanna be where you are! I like it like that. Now you see why I miss you when you're gone. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
wonderful as always, lady, you have a gift with words |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sheer p-o-e-t-r-y ! Wonderfully expressed. Earth Angel |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A cooling breeze to welcome Autumn... well done, Regina... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rwood, I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. It was like a breath of fresh air. I hope to read more of your work. Thanks for sharing. Best Wishes, Ethel....garysgirl |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Regina, More to this piece than first meets the eye. A very, very good piece. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
reg - yes. hugs poet-girl. |
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