Open Poetry #22 |
Loving You.....You Loving Me... |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Love you? Why would one ever perceive not? Might it be the silence of lips. The lack of one’s touch. The look of eyes without that gleam. Could it be these? Could it just be...sometimes... I struggle to say the words... I fail to grasp the hand... Never because I don’t For...even on my worst day... Our worst day...I will... I will always love you.... And, I wish to be here... Here, my love....beside you, as each day passes, each night comes.. As each moon sets beyond the hills.. My love will not set, nor wane... Even on those days when I don’t have that gleam.... When I fail to reach out and touch you, as you have touched me... over all of these years... Loving me, as I too, love you... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry She is lucky to be so loved! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Barry, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, she is so lucky to have a wonderful faithful love like you, this is an ultimate declaration of love, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You are both so very fortunate to have found a love so strong. I know you had to work at it as my love and I do as well. Very nicely penned Barry. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this should be a song It's wonderful!! |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Magnus, You write so beautifully. I'm touched when I read your thoughts. Your expression of love assures me that the heart is alive and well. SimplyGold |
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FuzzyFrazzledFraggle Member
since 2002-09-20
Posts 155Fraggle Rock |
sweet simply pure gold and then some *sigh* Consider yourself fuzzed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yet another wonderful read Magnus! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - a very touching dedication to someone close and loved. Best to you... BC |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Very best to you both always. ThisDiamond |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
excellence in your love expressed...tis truly Magnus! hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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