Beauty(The Way I Feel about You)

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Open Poetry #22

Beauty(The Way I Feel about You)

Street Poet
Member

since 2002-07-07

Posts 82

0 posted 2002-08-19 03:34 AM

I'm thankful to be in your presence
When I'm around you my heart starts to beat fast like I'm on X
Wanting to know everything about you not just having sex
To see another day is to see you all over again
More than friends I hope I feel like this until time ends
Which is never so I'm saying I wanna feel this way about you forever
I have thoughts of what it would be like if we cuddle a night
You wrapped in my arms holding me tight
In a world that's fearless I feel invincible when we kiss
Total bliss are the words that explain this thing between you and I
On a high that's completely natural and a love that purely factual
At the actual momment I'm lost in your big brown eyes
You are my narcotic and I fiend for you all day everyday
your name on the tip of my tongue because I can't find anything else to say
The definition of a real woman you are a role model of success and love
cloud 9 doesn't explain the level of love I'm on
Beauty this the way I feel about you

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2002-08-19 10:44 AM

Isn't love grand!

but, "I fiend for your" I don't understand that phrase.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2002-08-19 11:19 AM

I hear a lot of the Yo boys slipping into an acappella
Song styling, which has a different type of feel to it.
More like:

I Thank you, I say thank you for you presence,
I need you, I got to inhale all your essence,
You make me, me inside goes all a’flutter,
It’s you babe, babe you are like no other,
Inside me, my body want to sing
Because you, you I want to know all things
It’s you babe, babe you are so complex
It’s just us, us and not about having sex,
~~

But I guess all streets are different
Enjoyed the read of you poem

Gloom

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