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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-09-29 09:15 AM



Souls Share

Soaring
spirits take flight
on wings of love and trust
blindly flying into the night.
Souls Share.


If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

© Copyright 2002 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 2002-09-29 09:30 AM


I am not familiar with this form, now you've inspired me. THis is very beautiful

Liz

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2002-09-29 10:29 AM


Liz, cinquians are a form I learned awhile back.  It is a basic 2-4-6-8-2 form and I have alot of fun with it.  Please try one, I am sure yours would be fantastic!  Thanks for reading.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2002-09-29 10:54 AM


Gentle Spirit - souls share, a most loving thought...

BC

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4 posted 2002-09-29 11:01 AM


Gentle Spirit, a little twist on the form as I learned it, but absolutely beautiful in its content, yes, lovely.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2002-09-29 11:20 AM


Bill thanks much for stopping in. It is appreciated.

Vas, I would be interested in seeing how you learned it to see what the difference is.  Thanks for stopping by.

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6 posted 2002-09-29 02:36 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I love the versatile feel of your words, this cinquain soars on wings of the dove to loves true bliss, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SmartChick
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7 posted 2002-09-29 02:54 PM


This is a lovely cinquian, Gentle Spirit.
ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2002-09-29 03:26 PM


Beautiful words presented with perfection.
Nice write. ThisDiamond

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9 posted 2002-09-29 04:01 PM


I really like the cinquians, and this one is great!
Enchantress
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10 posted 2002-09-29 04:07 PM


Excellent Donna...
Very nicely done!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Magnus
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11 posted 2002-09-29 06:16 PM


Now you have probably got a lot of us
thinking and will inspire yet our own...

Though I doubt our's will be at the par of
your own...

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2002-09-29 07:29 PM


Soooooo loverly!

Linda

Paul Wilson
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13 posted 2002-09-29 09:00 PM


Donna~~ Very enjoyable. I'm so glad you explained what a cinquian is.Thanks for sharing...Paul
SimplyGold
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14 posted 2002-09-29 09:16 PM


Yes, Donna

This is lovely and I too, am glad you explained a cinquian.

I learned something today!

Thank you.


The Crimson Knight
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15 posted 2002-09-29 09:33 PM



Sharing
Just one to one
Combining to make two
Building more than two when we’re done
Loving


How’s This GS, just a try at the form hope you like

Dirk

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16 posted 2002-09-29 09:50 PM


Awesome Donna. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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