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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Souls Share Soaring spirits take flight on wings of love and trust blindly flying into the night. Souls Share. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I am not familiar with this form, now you've inspired me. THis is very beautiful Liz |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Liz, cinquians are a form I learned awhile back. It is a basic 2-4-6-8-2 form and I have alot of fun with it. Please try one, I am sure yours would be fantastic! Thanks for reading. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gentle Spirit - souls share, a most loving thought... BC |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Gentle Spirit, a little twist on the form as I learned it, but absolutely beautiful in its content, yes, lovely. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Bill thanks much for stopping in. It is appreciated. Vas, I would be interested in seeing how you learned it to see what the difference is. Thanks for stopping by. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I love the versatile feel of your words, this cinquain soars on wings of the dove to loves true bliss, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a lovely cinquian, Gentle Spirit. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Beautiful words presented with perfection. Nice write. ThisDiamond |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I really like the cinquians, and this one is great! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent Donna... Very nicely done! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Now you have probably got a lot of us thinking and will inspire yet our own... Though I doubt our's will be at the par of your own... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Soooooo loverly! Linda |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Donna~~ Very enjoyable. I'm so glad you explained what a cinquian is.Thanks for sharing...Paul |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Yes, Donna This is lovely and I too, am glad you explained a cinquian. I learned something today! Thank you.  |
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The Crimson Knight Member
since 2002-09-16
Posts 57Reno, NV |
Sharing Just one to one Combining to make two Building more than two when we’re done Loving How’s This GS, just a try at the form hope you like Dirk |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awesome Donna. Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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