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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-09-29 12:57 PM

“DREAMS THAT COULD”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
I feel warmth of southern
breezes, hear guitars
strumming softly into
the darkness…

I watch as a star falls
from the sky lighting
the night around me…

It speaks to me like the
wind does to the trees
in the forest, yet as it
passed by it whispered
of my name…

I see dreams that could,
visions within, knowing
shadows of someone to
hold close to me into
the dawn of a
tender morning…
~~~~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-09-29 01:56 AM

this is very romantic, the images so clear...well done!!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2002-09-29 01:57 AM

A warm southern breeze and soft guitar sounds, what a nice romantic combination.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-09-29 03:35 AM

(sigh) Awwwwwww, I love the romantic feel of this, sweet friend, may you always fly your kite dreams to her wind and know they will come true and you will be showered with blessings, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

4 posted 2002-09-29 03:48 AM

Bill...Sir I really admire you for the smooth way you have with words, painting visions within the readers mind...Paul

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

5 posted 2002-09-29 08:45 AM

A definite sigh-starter!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2002-09-29 09:28 AM

shadows of someone....

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-09-29 11:06 AM

Nicely done BC....see it very easily...

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2002-09-29 11:10 AM

Sentiments from the stars...the way love is you know...ThisDiamond

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2002-09-29 12:36 PM

This reads like a beautiful song Bill. Well done.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2002-09-29 12:58 PM

Bill, this speaks to me---almost croons to me with its lilting and melodious undertones.

To me, that would be the perfect romantic evening!

~ May you have many of them! As they say, you attract what you are! ~

Linda

SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

11 posted 2002-09-29 01:03 PM

Very nice read.

Thank you

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

12 posted 2002-09-29 01:05 PM

Bill

A beautiful and romantic dream...well done!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

13 posted 2002-09-29 04:16 PM

Beautifully done Bill.
Most of your work would be wonderful set to music.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

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