Open Poetry #22 |
Rainbows and Chocolate |
SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Chocolate Trees I went looking for rainbows on a warm summer's eve Dancing down an empty roadway pretending to believe that all the trees were chocolate and the flowers frosting on a cake and that all the birds were talking of the houses they would make They went about their business busy with each single chore reminding all the animals that they were people once before and than it suddenly happened lightning flashed across the sky the owls starting hooting and deer began to hide I felt the rain around me soaking in my cotton clothes my hair was wet and frazzled as raindrops trickled down my nose Well, just as I was running and much to my surprise down at the end of the roadway and where the sun would rise I saw a double rainbow with colors in bright hues of reds, greens and yellows against the sky of blue I never could have imagined anything so vividly Yes, God could make a rainbow but, I made chocolate trees [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (09-29-2002 10:54 AM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SimplyGold - you are just simply gold in your rainbows and chocolate... BC |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
"Sweet"! *smiles* ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow! Chocolate trees! I love chocolate. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Rainbows and chocolate"?---What's not to like?!? This delightful poem makes me feel happy! I may have my feet firmly planted on "Earth" but the other half of me dwells in a magical world, such as you have described, as an "Angel"! tehe I love everthing about this poem---the fantasy, the imagery, the rhyme and rhythm, the lightness of the mood---Thank you for starting my day off with a big SMILE ! Earth Angel |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Thank you Earth Angel, It makes me happy to know that you enjoyed. I think I'm getting back on track. It's a great day! SimplyGold FYI: Waiting for your next write |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Thank you Bill, You make me |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
SmartChick, Wait till you eat the chocolate cherries that fall from the cherry tree. Glad you enjoyed. SimplyGold |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Tiersdin, Not as sweet as your reply. Thank you. SimplyGold |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
yummy poem. yet funny |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay!!! Mmmmmmmm...this is beautiful and yummy, I imagined the cute rainbows made of Jolly Ranchers candy and marshmallow unicorns and caramel fairies, this is gorgeous, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Kellie, Thanks, I've been trying to be lighter in my writing lately. I'm having fun.. Glad you got a kick out of it. Critique and suggestions are very welcome. SimplyGold [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (09-29-2002 09:49 PM).] |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Noah, I can see those yummy carmel fairies and the marshmellow unicorns. I love when you let your mind draw your innocense out. You are so unique, the purity of your thoughts are truly a gift. Thank you. SimplyGold |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
And god saw his rainbow with your chocolate trees and was inspired.His voice boomed from on high."Let there be M&Ms". paladin [This message has been edited by paladin (09-29-2002 08:47 PM).] |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Paladin, I'm laughing so hard my stomache is hurting. I'll never look at m&m's again the same. SimplyGold |
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