Open Poetry #22 |
(First Post) Under Her Possession |
Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
I’ve heard tales tell before Of pulses made to quicken From but a furtive glance Yet I had not so been stricken I have heard of those eyes That sear through to the soul Knowing the pain avoided Somehow did not console In the opening of this wound For the very first time I felt finally what others Had spoke of in my mind Know I now of singular beauty Of a look that holds one bound As visual acuity heightens And mutes the slightest sound Nothing else consumes me thus So complete the obsession That I do not wither away Under her possession |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now this, this is going to curry much delight. Welcome, Magician, to a whole new world of poetry...I'm going to enjoy having you around! And I think you will find a few members who apparently have a lot in common with you! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Oh yes, this is delightful. Welcome to Passions. I too am going to like having you around. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magician~ Welcome to Passions~ A lovely entry post~ You'll find much to enjoy and hopefully much to share in this circle that has no end~ Touching poet ... touching friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
Thank you very much Sunshine. I'd like to know who these people are in common with me, I thought I was uncommon. LOL |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You've whetted my appetite. Sate me! SATE ME! just kidding. Welcome to passions! Squirrely Q |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Magician, if your name has anything to do with your life and/or hobbies, trust me, they'll find YOU! *poof* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Magician?!!...as in abracadabra? Sorry, I just got so excited by the pen name... I almost didn't say.... WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! I very much enjoyed your first post! I look forward to watching more of your illusions! ~Magical smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ *Poof*!! *Please email me as I have a question regarding your user name.* ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
Thank you all! |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
A glance that pulls her deep inside Her pulse does quicken, her mind does race With disregard for wounds or pain And so she gives her heart with faith Your words speak volumes, Magician. Welcome! Indigo |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Magician Welcome to Passions! I don't "poof" but I can say I enjoyed your poem. |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
Wow, thanks Indigo. Thank you Martie. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magician Welcome and enjoyed your write. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Hocus pocus, and voila, you have a gorgeous beautiful debut poem, I LOVE IT!!! This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I already know I am going to love reading your fabulous poetry! Welcome to Passions, sweet Magician, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magician, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
*applauds* outstanding... ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to these magical blue pages. I enjoyed your imagery, and hope to read more soon. Wave your magic wand here anytime, and you will have many readers. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Welcome to Passions Mr. Magician. I certainly hope you don't disappear. Your verse renders me to believe in the power of the eyes..hypnotic suggestions dear poet.. Sincerely, Reg |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
welcome to passions |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
I was captivated by the read, Magician.... you weave a spell with words. I look forward to reading more of you .... in the blue. Love, Light and Peace, Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. [This message has been edited by Magicmystery (08-14-2002 09:37 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Ive heard of those eyes that sear too... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to Passions. I look forward to more of your work Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* Can you be my poet? Geesh..lol..not my love..just my poet. Lovely, this.. "two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
A very nice romantic debut, welcome to passions! |
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