Open Poetry #22 |
Rainbows of Love |
CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Rainbows of Love Soft white wispy mist floating in the treetops Lit by the dawning of a pink morning sun tingeing still dark gray clouds. Warm bluish misty air, drifting over verdant mountains Like your whisper on my cheek. The deep blue of a clear, crisp sky Snow white puffy clouds Parading in random file on a slow breeze Throwing cool shadows on newly cut bright green grass. Like the peace you give me. Flickering yellows Itinerant white/yellow/red sparks Off rough logs over curling blue flames And glowing, golden embers warming the room. Like the comfort of you. Pulsating deep reds shot with Exploding purples/blues/greens Ejecting day-glow pinks and light yellows Like our passion. Flat, slate gray clouds low to the horizon With a fine, cold drizzle driven onto barren ground On a raw, relentless, black wind. Like your absence A rainbow fronting roiling storm clouds Brilliant, highlighted with no end. Myriads of colors Blending Like our love. Poetry is: |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
completely beautiful |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Thank you dear SEA smiles, Cher Poetry is: |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
CSKpoet - I do like the way you describe the scene, and then add the last touching sentence to each verse. Very nice... BC |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Thank you, Bill kudos, Cher Poetry is: |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, and may rainbows always bleed in your hearts with the doves song of rue love, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
CSKpoet, I love the imagery. Enjoyed very much. |
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