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Tribute to the Rain
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Tribute to the Rain |
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JediRaver Junior Member
since 2002-08-16
Posts 23ATL, GA, USA |
Tribute to the Rain... I'd like to pose a tribute to the sweetest, springtime rain. As it runs all down my shoulders I feel it wash away the pain as water is the essence of the life upon this Earth I think of it as Angel tears in joys they share together to share a new creation in rebirth The drops of rain that rest upon the leaves of evergreens show all of perfect nature is more than what She seems When it sprinkles and the sky is grey the many shades of darker tones appear to me and shine so bright imploring me to stay. The rain that falls upon my cheeks caresses me so soft and true I lie upon the wet, wet grass quite refreshed in soaking up the dew. As the clouds soon break and sun shall peak and rain shall lessen so the band of colors in the sky give me hope that this rain is not the last so I cherish all the tears of heaven in rememberance of showers past -JediRaver  > |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
a beautiful sprinkling down the page Jedi Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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chitsank Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 88 |
A fitting tribute to the rain indeed! u've painted a vivid description of the rain with ur sweet words. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Jedi... A very thought provoking Piece. Tears from Heaven so that all of Gods creations may survive here on earth... Paul |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I love the rain, and love the wet-behind-the-ears-ness of this poem. |
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