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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-09-27 01:13 PM

Escape

in your
concrete garden tall
I shall raise your eyes
above the wall
to a place
by the restless sea
where salty air
flows free
dried from the world
this water saves
peacefulness rides
upon the waves
a clear blue sky
with wrinkled linen clouds
and gulls are
your only crowds
to walk ribbons
of sands of time
a breathtaking
view sublime
a place where
your soul can flow
kite like in lusty
breezes that blow
so when corners appear
in every inch of rooms
and holds you
tightly like a tomb
remember this place
it is your beach
a secret of your own
within reach

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (09-27-2002 01:17 PM).]

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

1 posted 2002-09-27 03:13 PM

I was just taken away from work for a moment.
~*Sigh(~
Thanks for the mini vacation!

~Sheri

"Don't wait for your ship to come in ...
Swim out to it"

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2002-09-28 11:56 AM

Whytheheck is this WWAAAYYYY down here?
Geesh..
lovely, Lady..
as usual

"two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion"

excerpt from "I Love You"

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-09-29 11:02 AM

A personal vacation spot....wherever the
mind chooses.... This is good Helen...

Back to the top you go..

The Crimson Knight
Member

since 2002-09-16

Posts 57
Reno, NV

4 posted 2002-09-29 09:17 PM

“a place where
your soul can flow
kite like in lusty
breezes that blow”

A soul flying kite-like, a sort of different idea than most people want; because most people done want any strings to restrain them. I guess it’s all depends on whose got hold of the string. Very interesting write.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-09-29 09:20 PM

Very nicely penned Helen.
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

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