Open Poetry #22 |
Glimpse |
Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Glimpse I rise from my groggy sleep from too large dreams I get withlostin though I saw you there . . . somewhere I could not touch My morning images flickerrrrrr in screened light to my eyes as clear as glass! but there is really nothing there and no thing I can touch It could be last week It could be last year have I slept so long ? . . . Tonight will you be there Tonight? © 081802 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very clever write!! Wonderful presentation! Yes...I'll be there. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Extremely expressive poem. Enjoyed the interesting presentation. ThisDiamond |
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misery_made_beautiful Junior Member
since 2002-08-10
Posts 36 |
Very smart! Enjoyed it much. P.S. You kind of look like someone from "The Lord of the Rings" movie Looking forward to reading another from you. "Aging keeps life interesting" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) All I know for sure is that we will always be here for you as you continue to grace us with your wonderful words! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet E.J, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
stunning |
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nichola_louise Junior Member
since 2002-08-17
Posts 24Adelaide, Australia |
I really did get a 'glimpse' into your world. Wonderful written, amd brilliantly presented...... |
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