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Open Poetry #22

Whisper To Me

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-09-26 09:56 PM

Whisper To Me

tonight as darkness
is in slow unfold
whisper to me
secrets of time untold
tell me how love
first came to be
how waves tickle
gently caressing the seas
of how mountains are
poetry in rock
hearts are things
we learn to unlock
why seeds are
just a tiny tease
when standing lost
in this forest of trees
and sand sifts softly
through the glass
after healed from sadness
a joy comes to surpass
and the riddles
of things unknown
your breath is the same
air that has forever flown
and was there
ever a time
when you
were not mine?

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2002-09-26 10:03 PM

Exceptional! I especially like the last line...captures so well the endurance and familiarity that follows love. ThisDiamond

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-09-26 10:10 PM

(sigh) Oh Helen, this is wonderfully heartfelt, sweet friend, I love it, and may this love in your heart always remain true and strong, this is touching, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

WhileIWasGone
Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

3 posted 2002-09-26 10:14 PM

This is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. Great work....enjoyed very much.

DeaDiAmore

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