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Captivated
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This night my love, to miss you most To stir inside of tributary thoughts Particles that will not settle, or lie flat Against my will, like rustling leaves In the wind...a disturbance This night, when I would travel By foot into the darkness Pressed against your chest To hear the drumming of Life within my own heart In the wind...a distraction This night my love, to miss you To wander restless in the caverns Downy cotton, floating helplessly Drifting in a wonderland In the wind Copyright Kkh 8/18/02 |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Like a dream too large and lost . . . unsettling . . . |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Kathleen, this is sooooo beautifully "captivating", I love it, you sweep us all off our feet into your beautiful world of fantasy always in your poetry, I love it, this is graceful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I see that we brought out a little bit of our creativity last night...... A beautiful poem, such a thought to have within and the hope of the moment shared. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - I missed this one, don't know how, must have been my eyes or something. Nicely captivated... BC |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
ThisDiamond, This is indeed a diamond. A beautiful lonely write, liked it immensely. ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Kathy... this is a lovely jewel of a poem... It feels like a dream.  ~ hugs from dreaming chipmunkLyra |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
don't want anyone to miss this one... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
TD~ This is so verly lovely.....hugsssss and peace.... Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thanks so much my friends, for sharing these hours with me. ThisDiamond |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kathleen...this one is meant to be absorbed into the skin, slowly... it is a shimmer...thank you... |
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