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VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2002-09-26 10:36 AM

Could the Morning?

Could the morning be a dawning
of the effervescent kind?
Could it challenge and entice me
with thoughts to spur my mind?

Could the wispy gray clouds
merely be a cooling spot
to weave tales of mystery,
if I but give it thought?

Could the humid bits of air
serve to cleanse the hour’s palette,
washing away dust and pollen
and all odors of shallot?

I suppose it’s like most days
to be just what we make them,
a tale of woe and misery
or an iridescent gem.

©September 26, 2002

(The use of shallot is not merely a forced rhyme, we really do have hours of onion smells permeating the air, often.)

Wow! Seems like I've been away from here for a long time. But I'm back this morning for a while.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

1 posted 2002-09-26 10:49 AM

Smiling. I vote for the gem. Bob

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2002-09-26 10:51 AM

Me, too, Bob.

Good to see you here, I'm going to look again for one of yours. I haven't spotted one lately.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

3 posted 2002-09-26 10:52 AM

Me too. Nice write VAS!!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-09-26 10:57 AM

VAS,
A lovely write but what you say is true
"I suppose it’s like most days
to be just what we make them."
Thank you for posting, enjoyed.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-09-26 10:21 PM

(smiles) Oh Virginia, I couldn't agree with you more, sweet friend, I know these aromas so well and believe they are all part of what makes the variety offered to us all! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2002-09-26 10:48 PM

I suppose you're right

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

7 posted 2002-09-29 11:59 AM

Vas,

Pushing this back to the top. A great reminder for a beautiful rainy day here!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2002-09-29 12:33 PM

Lovely write Vas, thanks for sharing.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2002-09-29 12:54 PM

You're absolutely right on with this write!

Our attitude can cloud our day!--but with a positive attitude, we can see the sun shining even if it is temporarily hidden by dark clouds.

EA

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2002-09-29 06:31 PM

Virginia....

In spite of the onions....I think this is
a gem....OK? ...

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