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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Visions I see dragons in the distance Full of awe and veiled insistence Circling in infinity Close to our vicinity. Puffing smoke and fires fume Scorching all the fields abloom Flying o’er the dogma stay Passing o’er naiveté. Building castles for their rune Within the shadows of the moon Using up our living force Sapping from our only source. Their drink an acids play with death They’re breathing a fires breath Consuming every ounce of meal Every ounce that they can steal A dragon lives in each of us An omnibus of over plus |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done Sy... always a pleasure to read your words and see what iinsight you offer for us to contemplate. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! Good write...enjoyed the morning read. ~Morning hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Y'know what? Do you? Do you? You're just playing with us... there's no given age of you... you are Merlin in an omnibus... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T., there isn't a dragon in you---there's a tiger!!! ~ and I love to listen to you R-O-A-R !!! ~ EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair Thank you for the read, reply and well done. Enchantress, Thank you dear hugs back and have a good one. Sunshine, Wish I were, LOL thank you sweet.  Earth Angel, Symbolically their both the same, enjoyed your comment. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Flying o’er the dogma stay Passing o’er naiveté. ================================ and those will be my waaaaay cooooool lines for the day... So Randy wants to Roar does he? ... Tell him to meet me at the shore. I'll give him a sunburn he wont forget.  (and if that dont get him going... some sand crabs in his shorts might. LOL *winkiewinkie*   |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart did you miss me? I can't wait for tomorrow, see you here.!!!! As always this is simply stunning writing, and the quality shines through. Now don't get lost on the way to us, but if in doubt go via Tampa airport, we know the way from there. You have no idea how often we have visited that place. Even when we don't intend to. as always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I love the bit of fantasy the beginning images play out for us...and then reality kicks in, how easily fantasy can fool us and we can end up in sorrow for our naiveté. Excellent piece, Sy! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, From your up answer I can see you are having a ball. I know all about sunburn and sand crabs thank you. But I would enjoy some raspbery tea when you have time. WWRS |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mushy Thanks for the read, we'll be leaving here 8:00 tomorrow morning. Mike's driving. Should take about five hours. See you then. VAS, You got the message, nice reply, thank you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy I took the dragons breath as the fire on the mountain crest looking for more homes to burn your poem became my concern can you send a water breathing one I promise him would be much fun |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, You prefer a shark? LOL I'll see what I can do. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
um...hmmm... does this mean we are the people we warn ourselves about? nicely done--I love it inside yer head. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Your so cute, If there was something else I sure wouldn't blame us. LOL |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay!!! Yes, a dragon does live deep down in every one of us and yours always shoots mouldering flame of poetic passion and grace! (big hugggssssss) This is a mighty wonderful treasure, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you and your dragon, LOL |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - Too bad all our dragons couldn't be like "Puff"...and make us and others smile. I enjoyed this poem a little late to-day as I haven't been feeling too well. But, I am glad I am up to reading abit this evening. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nicely written |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - ah, the dragon, you write about this part of one well. Mine is there, but know not where, yet it will stay, not to play... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, thank you so much for the read and reply. I hope you are better and stay well. Vandana, Thank you for the like. Bill, Yes we all have one. Called by many names but never the less is there. Thanks for the read and comment. |
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