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Daniel van Vliet
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0 posted 2002-09-25 06:16 PM



Rape me with your expectations;
your strange afflicted happiness.
Am I angry at being burnt by your lies?
Yes I am...  and why should you care!
You've ignited this desire to escape
and purge myself into a dark abyss.

[This message has been edited by Daniel van Vliet (09-25-2002 06:20 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-09-25 06:17 PM


Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2002-09-25 07:04 PM


oh myyyyyy...this poem leaves me speechless...(maybe the word i am looking for is...gripping...helen
Daniel van Vliet
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3 posted 2002-09-26 05:44 PM


... tks. The poem envoke some very raw emotions.
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