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Redneck_13
New Member

since 2002-09-19

Posts 8
Arkansas, USA

0 posted 2002-09-25 02:01 AM

Like a passing glance we part once more
Awaiting the day we'll part no more.
Together forever we'll be for sure
Because nothing can break a love this pure.

I think I knew it the moment we met
That you'd be the girl I'd never forget.
Our future together seems to be set
As long as I'm with you I'll have no regret

For so long I used to sit and ponder
Because I was without you and all I did was wonder.
In each others absence our hearts grow fonder
With the strength we've found no trials can squander.

My love to you I forever lend
You’re not only my love but my life long friend.
Know that my love for you will never end
But I'm limited at this time to only send
A kiss in the wind.

Hey sorry i have a new one like everyday im just working on my membership status. later

secretlife
Member

since 2002-07-30

Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,

1 posted 2002-09-25 02:23 AM

Kiss In the Wind.....

Nice thought.. U know you have avery nice poems, your written is great.. I love it very much, Welcome to passions...

Hugesss

Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

2 posted 2002-09-25 03:25 AM

Welcome to our wonderful world of poetry!! It is great to have you here, Redneck_13! I really enjoyed your piece, and look forward to seeing more of them.

Take care!!

Krishankins

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2002-09-25 03:52 AM

Gee don't apologize - this was lovely and whomever it is for is one very lucky girl indeed, nice work.

God Bless

Sharon

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2002-09-25 11:29 AM

Hi! Redneck! It truly is a blessing when lovers are also each others' best friend. How wonderful for you both---and you expressed this very well with this poem.

I look forward to more of your thoughts put to paper!

~ smiles to you this fine fall day ~

Earth Angel

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-09-25 11:33 AM

Awesome write. I love the thought

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-09-25 02:16 PM

(smiles) No need to apologize, sweet friend, it all takes a little bit of time for us all to get used to this place, but you truly are special to us all and I know this special girl you wrote this for will always be blessed to love you! (big hugggssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Benjamin, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-09-25 02:27 PM

Beautiful write..love the title.
Very well done.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

8 posted 2002-09-25 04:50 PM

Welcome to PIP!

I enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to more.
Finding that many rhyming words with out making feel forced is tough,
at least it is for me.
Well Done!

~Sheri

"Don't wait for your ship to come in ...
Swim out to it"

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