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Open Poetry #22
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secretlife
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0 posted 2002-09-24 08:01 AM



Pain

Life is hard
Heart is bleeding
Eyes is sheding tears
smiling is depressed
Hope is the remainder

Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)
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Krishankins
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1 posted 2002-09-24 10:25 AM

You have put a lot of thoughts into this one. The last line does shed a little light on these dismal feelings, though. Nicely done!!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?
the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-09-24 03:54 PM

Awesome write. Awesome thought

Cold hands means a warm heart
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