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Open Poetry #22

Bus Ride

Hapless
Junior Member

since 2002-09-22

Posts 10
NY, USA

0 posted 2002-09-23 10:04 PM

I peer.
The window, cold and wet against my palm.
The road streaks by.
Heavy metal thrashes in my ears.
I peer,
Oblivious to the chatter around me,
Oblivious to the lovers behind me.
Alone,
I peer.
The seat next to me, empty.
Alone, in my world.
What a lonely world.
I peer.
A tear rolls down my face
And falls to an untouched hand.
The bus moves on,
And I peer.

Thoughts?

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2002-09-23 10:50 PM

Awww, so sad. I'll ride the bss with ya. lol

I hate to ride the bus anyway. thanks for the read.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-09-23 11:33 PM

Sad!!! I know the feeling. Good write

Cold hands means a warm heart

leafseranade
Member

since 2001-07-06

Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA

3 posted 2002-09-25 12:29 PM

I remember riding the bus with such similar feelings it's like I'm back there. Such a lonely place to be in (in your mind) Good write.

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