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Unfair Advantage
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia 
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Unfair Advantage. A chance meeting, waiting in line to pay for the fuel in my car. I knew someone good had arrived by other women in the store. Tall, fair hair and a killer smile that went right to your ice blue eyes. I just had to keep looking back, involuntary, mesmerised. I found you were looking my way that smile still on your handsome face, giving me a look that told me you know you're making my heart race. Leaving, I walk past close enough to smell a hint of your cologne. The final unfair advantage that won't leave my senses alone. I smiled at you and walked outside, your eyes follow me out the door. I know that I'll never see you or my fickle heart any more. 20/9/02 Just a bit of fun with a chance meeting that happened just like this...but don't worry, my heart is still intact.  Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write...much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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FuzzyFrazzledFraggle Member
since 2002-09-20
Posts 155Fraggle Rock |
 Been there done that! Gotta love those chance meetings...and sometimes those chance meetings turn out to happen again with the same person when u least expect it..funny how that works,eh!? Consider yourself fuzzed |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Dee, this is such a wonderful coincidence, sweet friend, it is funny when things like that happen! (big hugggsssss) Very well said, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dee, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
don't you love it when that happens? Nice one! Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Nice little taste teaser Dee~ gotta love it!  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a wonderful poem, Dee! I am glad your heart is still intact. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Enchantress, glad you liked. I had fun writing it. Fraggle, yeah sometimes the chance meetings turn out to be the best ones. Noah, thank you as usual.Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
loner, thank you. Kris, yeah I do love it when that happens. Blues lady, nice to see you. Thanks for stopping in. Smart Chick, actually my heart belongs to someone else so I can't really give it away anyway. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Hey there sweet lass, great write. That happens to me all the time.... usually just my jaw hangs open too much.... Parker |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Hey Park, I can believe that too Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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