Open Poetry #22 |
Slumber'd rose |
Ousiders Cattermole Junior Member
since 2001-11-02
Posts 27 |
It always seems that in my dreams of dappl'd hues and griev's sighs; And hither I lye, 'neath the rye with guild'd lips and soot for wine. |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
lovely. I really liked this line. "with guild'd lips and soot for wine" thanks for sharing. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Wonderfully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I agree with Miah, that line was WAY cool!!! I like the short ones the most!! Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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