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Open Poetry #22

Slumber'd rose

Ousiders Cattermole
Junior Member

since 2001-11-02

Posts 27

0 posted 2002-09-23 07:06 PM

It always seems that in my dreams
of dappl'd hues and griev's sighs;

And hither I lye, 'neath the rye
with guild'd lips and soot for wine.

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2002-09-23 08:11 PM

lovely. I really liked this line.

"with guild'd lips and soot for wine"

thanks for sharing.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-09-23 11:37 PM

Wonderfully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

3 posted 2002-09-23 11:51 PM

I agree with Miah, that line was WAY cool!!!
I like the short ones the most!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

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