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Into The Darkness |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“INTO THE DARKNESS” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Watched you go this morning, said goodbye for a long time… Held you close and whispered, you’re only once in a lifetime… It felt like I was in a dream, when one isn’t asleep or awake … Fingers parted and you were gone, at first signs of mornings break… I somehow knew when this night began, dawn’s light would become blackness… Another tear would slowly form within, and I would again drift, into the darkness… ~~~~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, Those things happen, enjoyed the read. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
nicely done, Bill! this is SO romantic nd sad! Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
Great job Bill, as usual, you always set standards of greatness with your poetry. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Held you close and whispered, you’re only once in a lifetime… Well done Bill...but tis a sad one. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so sad, Bill. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Bill...sad yet one of your better writes! Enjoyed much! ~hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Ems Junior Member
since 2002-09-22
Posts 13England |
It can be difficult to use rhythm and rhyme like this without spoiling the poetry, the meaning behind it, and the message you want to put across. You do this well. Ems x-x-x |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssss) Oh Bill, this sounds so sad, I hope everything is better now and you have found your way back into the light of hope, hang in there, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill You have written the hurt of goodbye...the longing easily felt with your words. |
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