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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-09-20 10:57 PM





Peace In Gentle Surround
    
Listen to the chimes
blow upon the winds of time
where breezes so divine
send thoughts of life sublime.

Hear it as it whispers
to the trees as they confer
gently the leaves do stir
with mother nature they concur.

See Luna shining bright
through the dark of night
oh, what a glorious sight
of stars dancing in delight!

~Feel peace in gentle surround
here      where tranquility is found.~





If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (09-20-2002 11:14 PM).]

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-09-20 11:00 PM




Yay!!! And let me be the first to say you've done it!!! You certainly have touched this heart, sweet friend, looks like you are gonna get a raise with all the many more who will be touched by this, God Bless You, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-20-2002 11:01 PM).]

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2002-09-20 11:10 PM


I love the sound of this..the chimes and the gentle ease of your words that never fail to stir.  So pretty Donna...  


Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-09-20 11:14 PM


Donna, yes you have touched my heart with this piece...and therefore have achieved your dream.  Beautiful!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

the_loner_23
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4 posted 2002-09-20 11:23 PM


This put a smile on my face. Good write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2002-09-21 07:10 PM


Thank you all kindly for such wonderful replies.  The wind and moon can be lovely inspirations as they were when I wrote this.  Hugs to all.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

sigheyes
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6 posted 2002-09-22 02:56 PM


A peaceful poem Donna done with your special flare for nature.  Hugs.
Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2002-09-25 12:08 PM


SE thank you for always making the time to read my offerings.  Hugs to you.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Spine Grinder
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8 posted 2002-09-25 03:47 PM


wow...aunt donna...just wow..i really liked this alot. awesum job!

You can close your eyes to things you dont want to see,but u cant close your heart to things you dont want to feel.

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By the sea
9 posted 2002-09-25 03:49 PM


A very peaceful and beautifully written poem, Donna.  I could almost hear my wind chimes while reading it.

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

NewEnglandlazurlu
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10 posted 2002-09-25 03:54 PM


Donna, this brought such calm and peace to my heart and soul this afternoon. I enjoyed it so much.

Hugs, Marti

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11 posted 2002-09-25 04:00 PM


The wind and the moon---two of my favorite things in nature's realm.

The wind breathes life into my being while the moon brings me serenity and peace.

Donna, this was superbly done!

~ smiles to you ~
Linda

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2002-09-27 01:00 AM


Lovely thoughts...james
Gentle Spirit
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13 posted 2002-09-27 09:08 AM


May you all have a peaceful day filled with magic!  

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

garysgirl
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14 posted 2002-10-01 05:04 PM


After I read your poetry on the other page, I looked up more of it. You really have a beautiful way with words! Someone who writes with this much love has to have a lot of love in their heart. The way you wrote this poem made me want to sing the words out loud. Thanks for sharing with us!!!
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15 posted 2002-10-01 05:11 PM


nice
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