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Blue Kitty
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since 2002-08-05
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Virginia

0 posted 2002-09-20 01:27 PM


The beach was made for running on fast as you can,
Splashing the surf up as the ocean slides on the sand,
You go running wild one almost flying over the land.

Kick the wet sand up high to catch in your hair
Cake it dry bake in the sun with salt from the misting air,
Run wild one without worries and without a care.

Shout your name over the surf pounding so loud
The wind will bring the eternal spirit of the wild
Watching you takes me back to being a child.

P.


© Copyright 2002 P. Felinus - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-09-20 01:33 PM


Beautiful imagery. I love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-09-20 01:35 PM


Ah yes, running on the surfline, in that wet, compact mud. I loved that. Until I ran headlong over shells, and cut myself a bit.

Still, y' can't have everything.

Thanks for this.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2002-09-20 05:03 PM


What the hay! Why can't we still do that!
---I'll race ya!

~ may the gentle winds lift your spirit high! ~

EA

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2002-09-20 07:52 PM


Hooray for the beach...James
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