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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-09-19 07:25 PM



Paradise is now defined
enclosed within a space
for in the picture perfect
I can see your face.
I'll relive the memories
when alone sipping tea
the time I spent laughing
with your precious family.
I'll look upon the pictures
of the boy now a man
I'll hold back the tears
if possible I can.
For the time I missed
the years that slipped away
the experiences that made you
the man you are today.
I'll forever cherish
the memories we've made
the time we spent talking
late into the day.
Already I miss you
for soon you'll be gone
I hope next time
we're not apart for so long.

WhiteRose

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2002-09-19 07:29 PM


Oh Anne, so touching.   hugs to you.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (09-19-2002 07:29 PM).]

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2002-09-19 07:45 PM


I hope you gave a copy to your son. I am sure that this would really touch his heart---I know it did mine!

~ absolutely loverly!
Linda

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2002-09-19 10:21 PM


This is so sweet.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
4 posted 2002-09-19 10:47 PM


As a mother of sons, I can understand this so perfectly, Anne...
My older son died suddenly, 2 yrs ago... and my younger son lives in NYC...
missing them both...is so hard.

There exists a bond
between son and mother
unique and loving
unlike any other
~ hugs and tears

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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