Open Poetry #22 |
To Begin, Again |
Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
A grievous dawn lay softly above White sorrow clouded the sun The bird of love has broken it's wing As the first days without you have begun Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
I really enjoyed this. That first day can be the hardest. |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
poignant and powerful emotions! hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh God, you break my heart Kris... |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
You guys are making me blush!! Hugs 2 U all! Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh Kris, it seems I have started many a day with a grievous dawn. What a perfect way to put it. Hugs Sandra |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I hope this was just poetry and not a reflection of what is really going on in your personal life! If it is from true experience---is she nuts?!? You have written some awesome lines---all four of them! ~ a smile and a hug from across the miles ~ Linda |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssss) Oh Kristopher, I too hope this is just poetry because it made me cry too reading it! (sigh) I wish for loves dove to always croon in your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Excellent!! Thank you Kris for this enjoyed read... *~coco~* |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hey Sweetness! I can definitely relate to this piece you have penned. I remember all the times you've inspired me I'll have to get back in here more often and read ya! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...James |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Oh, wow..... powerful, as is everything you write. I love it, Kris, as I love reading your work always. Splendid. By the way, would it be gramatically(sp) better to say wings? Just curious. Sincerely, Titus "My imaginary friend thinks you have serious mental problems." |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A grievous dawn lay softly above White sorrow clouded the sun The bird of love has broken it's wing As the first days without you have begun _____________________________________ The dawn not meant to be of grief clouds, a shelter from the sun. The bird with mended wing will fly. A new day of life's begun. As always Kris, you say so much with so few words. You are the master of this form. Nicely done once again. |
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