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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-09-19 03:21 PM




And I ask you…
How is love blind?
When love is love
in my eyes….
I can clearly see;
Paused for perfection
Undecided decision
Without a direction
Heart standing still
Gathers time to recall
All things beautiful
And nothing at all
Swiftly and softly
In dream to dream dance
Cloud upon cloud
Seeking silver lined chance
Seizing the light
Sealing the fate
Consuming the joy
That I find in you
My heart is full
Half crazed, tears wept
Rhapsodies sung sweet
in softest brushed hue
And I ask you, yet
How can love not hear?
I bring mine
To you in a song
Powerful music of passion
As my melody
Lingers on ……….

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-09-19 03:31 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Kielo
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2 posted 2002-09-19 05:39 PM


Wow... this was great. Well done!
CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
3 posted 2002-09-19 11:35 PM


Thank you loner and Kielo. i appreciate the comments and time.
aloha, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you
4 posted 2002-09-20 12:27 PM


Love is blind becuase the heart sees and the eyes close.  

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2002-09-20 12:53 PM


sing your melody
love's blindfold shall be removed
love will sing your song

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2002-09-20 02:56 PM




(smles) Yes, I agree with Interloper's advice, keep sharing your love as you always do with us all and you will find all that special love in return! (big hugggssssss) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2002-09-20 03:13 PM


CSKpoet
Good question, lovely poem, enjoyed.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2002-09-22 10:46 PM


Enjoyed...James
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