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WhileIWasGone
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0 posted 2002-09-19 12:36 PM



In springtime frost cascades in gutters as
A thousand falling tears of shifting stone
Might fall when fleeting restoration has
In blushing flesh ensconced the sterile bone.
This flesh will melt like snowflakes into dust;
Such fragile microcosms must collapse-
But even ancient forests will combust
And grow from fragile shoots as ages lapse.
The changing drifts of continents are seen
To bounce, in slow eternal cycles' eyes;
Cavorting constellations all careen
In steady circles through the inky skies...
Such eternal cycles are never through;
Through all our changes, I'll always love you.

© Copyright 2002 Dea_Di_Amore - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2002-09-19 12:41 PM


Dea

One of the best poems about cycles that I have read, bringing it back to your feeling at the end...like circles, love unbroken.  Beauifully done!

Tammy Blessing
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2 posted 2002-09-19 12:55 PM



I love circular poetry!! This is great! What more can I say? Guess I'll have to post something circular of my own..hmmm...

Peace,love,light,happiness and circles!!
Tammy

bsquirrel
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3 posted 2002-09-19 01:17 PM


H.,
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M.

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (09-19-2002 01:17 PM).]

WhileIWasGone
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4 posted 2002-09-19 01:21 PM


Thanks for reading M....your very sweet...you know that.


H.

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