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Open Poetry #22

Compelling

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-09-19 11:33 AM

Compelling

how is it I knew you
before we met
a destiny cannot be
denied when it is set
it has no barriers
to place and time
the right word follows
for it is rhyme
there is real evidence
in all matter
its touch begins in tremble
and ripples in scatter
the essence of edge
so much part of the middle
to be yourself and part of another
the eternal riddle

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

1 posted 2002-09-19 12:12 PM

I always thought that the eternal riddle was, "If a tree falls in the forest?"

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-09-19 03:05 PM

Wonderfully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2002-09-19 03:11 PM

1DERFUL!!
One of your best

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-09-19 03:42 PM

1slick_lady
Another excellent write, enjoyed.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2002-09-19 04:19 PM

yes this is compelling.... nicely done

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2002-09-19 05:40 PM

enjoy

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