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Deception Of A Wound
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Deception Of A Wound |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
In the spaces lay vague the unaltered Fortune tells of the dregs where fate faltered Camelot in the skies over heard And recounted each innocent word In the clouds of occasional chatter Murmured once to see what was the matter Castle high to know why in revision And continued to meter decision In the same frame of mind are the masses Finding what in the world promise passes Can we now reach across this division? And heal quickly such unjust precision In the spaces and crevices swallowed Frantic steps to find pathways once followed Camelot in the skies over heard And made promise to carry each word Copyright Kkh 9/18/02 |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - flows and rhymns like a song... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond Camelot in the skies over heard And made promise to carry each word Would it be so. Enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kathleen...this is wonderful.. My most favoured poetry is about Camelot. This is a beauty! Into my library it goes. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Wonderfully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kathy, could this be of the church and the problems it faces? Anywhooo...it is a beautiful poem and the semi-repetition of certain lines adds to the flow of the poem...Nicely done lady... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love your writing here, Kathy... The references to Camelot remind me of the song... which in turn, reminds me of Jack and Jackie Kennedy... I will have that song in my head all night now. Thanks for sharing this.  ~ loving hugsLyra |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
and made promises to carry each word love the feel of that ending, superb! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Nice feelings, here, after this read  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang, this is good! wow! |
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