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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-09-18 10:57 AM



I miss the
sweetness of you

the man
I loved
with giddy
romantic zeal

the man
who could feel.

I miss the soft
touch of you
your caress
not careless

upon my skin.

I miss the mind
I filled with desire
with passion on fire
in a time now past

and I miss at last
the you of you

before the man
disappeared from view

replaced with this

oh how I miss
in this abyss

the shelter
of your love.

WhiteRose

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2002-09-18 11:04 AM


Your words were so wistful and full of longing, that you have me missing him as well---and I don't even know him!

Take care sweet rose of white!
EA


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Gaia
2 posted 2002-09-18 11:16 AM


...the man
who could feel.


The only kind worth missing.

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-09-18 11:19 AM




(big hugggsssssss) This is sadly beautiful, sweet friend, I hope this is fictional to your own heart and now you forever swim in an abyss of happiness and true love forever! (kiss on cheek) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have sucah a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-09-18 11:35 AM


You miss...but we enjoy...this poem. You write with such passion.
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2002-09-18 11:41 AM


WhiteRose
An excellent write, enjoyed.

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