Open Poetry #22 |
I Miss |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I miss the sweetness of you the man I loved with giddy romantic zeal the man who could feel. I miss the soft touch of you your caress not careless upon my skin. I miss the mind I filled with desire with passion on fire in a time now past and I miss at last the you of you before the man disappeared from view replaced with this oh how I miss in this abyss the shelter of your love. WhiteRose |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your words were so wistful and full of longing, that you have me missing him as well---and I don't even know him! Take care sweet rose of white! EA |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
...the man who could feel. The only kind worth missing. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) This is sadly beautiful, sweet friend, I hope this is fictional to your own heart and now you forever swim in an abyss of happiness and true love forever! (kiss on cheek) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have sucah a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
You miss...but we enjoy...this poem. You write with such passion. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
WhiteRose An excellent write, enjoyed. |
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