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Broken Promises / Loves Reward
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Broken Promises / Loves Reward |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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Broken Promises By Paul Wilson Broken promises shatter hearts one by one count them all like grains of sand Never promise that which you can’t give broken hearts the result from broken promises ~~~ Love’s Reward By Paul Wilson All that’s lost can be found hearts mend to love again To share love the true test we pledge our love again |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Paul This was absolutely stunning.....I loved it! Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sue~~ Thanks, Just an old gray haired man with nothing better to do tonight than ramble silly.I say tonight because it is now 3:25AM Wednesday. Thanks for the kind words Sue...Paul |
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smitty-j Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 72Florida, USA |
Never promise that which you can’t give..can you tell the world that? I love it (^_~) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Paul, Alot of truth, enjoyed the read. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 and  (sigh) Oh Paul, these poems both are so wonderful, the first one is heartaching and made me cry as my heart goes out to all those who lose love because of broken promises but the second made me smile showing love can always make amends! (big hugggsssss) These are wonderful, sweet friend, I love them, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Paul, both of these are lovely. I enjoyed them very much. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Paul, this gray haired lady loves to read your words. Hugs, Marti Every now and then take a good look at something not made |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I thought for sure he was a poet... He's a rambler?? Wasn't that a Nash?.. Um.. Does that put me in the same category?...  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Never promise that which you can’t give broken hearts the result from broken promises Great message Paul, somehow love sustains itself, for what if we were to let it turn to ashes? It's all in the keeping of one's soul where it learns acceptance and continues to thrive forevermore. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
These are beautiful, Paul... Do you always write so early in the morning? I sometimes get up in the middle of the night and write poetry... It must be a trait shared by all of us old grey haired people...  ~ hugs from a grey haired chipmunkLyra |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
smitty-j...Thanks for the reply. I try to live by these words but sometimes fall short...Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Seymour...Thank you sir. Glad you liked it...Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Noah...So glad you enjoyed them. There is always hope for what we want, we just have to work at it with the ones we love...Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Chris...I'm really glad you enjoyed them. Thanks for the reply...Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marti~Your sweet words put a smile on my face. Thank you so much...Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
BluesSerenade~Thank you for the kind reply. Your words really say it in such a wonderful way, We should never let love die...Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Lyra~ Thank you for the sweet reply. I always write at night, because I work nights and when things get slow I just start writting.Any time you are up at night real late drop me a line if I am working I will gladly spend some late night hours talking to Madame Chipmunk...Paul |
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