Open Poetry #22 |
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Beguile |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Her dimpled smile hides love's beguile, ...as draws me to her arms, This creature fair with ebon hair, ...who tempts with her charms, An evening star came from afar, ...crown jewel of summer's night, Angelic grace as we embrace, ...in glow of Luna's light, Fingers tracing, heartbeats racing, ...seeking to unveil, Her inner fire, my heart's desire, ...as to the stars we sail, I kiss her brow, to her avow, ...I shall your vassal be, Forevermore fair Terpsichore, ...Whil'st sail on welkin's sea, My goal fair Rose? my heart's disclose, ...mortal love and nothing more, Within thy breast, my lover's quest, ...I'll love thee evermore. |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Tim, that was just beautiful. ![]() |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
ahhhhh very romantic and well done enjoyed ![]() Cher |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
every now and then? I just claim something for ME...and insist that I be indulged in my delusions...this is one of those times... how else would you know that THIS is one of my favorite things? I kiss her brow, to her avow, ...I shall your vassal be, Forevermore fair Terpsichore... (grinning at me...I just read that three times more after pasting and found myself stroking my neck and smiling...er...that's a compliment! ![]() ooooh...chivalry is NOT dead...I need to re-count the head(s)! lol and winks m'lovely poetic justice. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I feel as though I have been eavesdropping... so I shall simply tiptoe away |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Tim, now I have a desire to put on my gown of beaded satin with the bell sleeves and dance the night away. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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smitty-j Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 72Florida, USA |
Fingers tracing, heartbeats racing, ...seeking to unveil, Her inner fire, my heart's desire, ...as to the stars we sail, wow...be still my heart....yummy (^_~) J |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tim, Beautiful flow in a good write makes for a good read, enjoyed. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Tim You beguile the reader with your words so beautiful. |
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