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Sweet Wicker Wind
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Sweet Wicker Wind |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Sweet Wicker Wind ~*Marge Tindal*~ Sweet wicker winds entwine me Ribboning thoughts now find me Lattice weave on unfurling breeze of memories that bind me~ Curlicue in soft surround Stitch of quilting's gentle sound All I am in fashion's preen poetic threads of wordy-sheen~ Ric-rac ravels of regret for thoughts that I have not penned yet Sweet wicker wind blow me long so that tomorrow my gentle song will play again in longing heart before it's time for me to part~ Delicate lacing from before when all the dreams mattered more Coming to rest in feathered nest blown by sweet wickered wind~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You just float on a sweet breath of wind here Margie-girl... glad I could catch another beaut of you before packin away this ole computer....(relocating...  )Love you lady!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Delicate lacing from before when all the dreams mattered more Marge, this is just lovely. It was a joy to read, and I am going back to read it again! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge you've wickered me!  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, you mirror my thoughts today, but your pen expresses them so clearly. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling heart sister and my soul’s delight, I love this you really are so incredibly talented. Wonderful writing, wonderful phrasing and the way you weave magic is simply the best Truly I utterly utterly utterly love this, and I wub you to xxxx You are special and woven into my heart always   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sweet wicker winds entwine me Ribboning thoughts now find me Lattice weave on unfurling breeze of memories that bind me~ Curlicue in soft surround Stitch of quilting's gentle sound ================================= Ric-rac ravels of regret for thoughts that I have not penned yet ================================== Let me guess...sitting in a wicker chair on a breezeway or patio in the sunshine state...  classic Marge poetic phrasing and word play...love the way you took the inspire and theme and carried it out all the way thru your rhymes ...even laced in some groovy alliterations ... lovely write here... a treat to read aloud.  If all the tear drops went to heaven |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Marge, This piece brought me back to childhood on Grandma's farm...amazing sensitivity in your words. ThisDiamond |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Marge, I am so glad I was able to get my computer fixed so I could read your beautiful poetry. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
"Ric Rak ravels of regret for thoughts I have not pennd yet" Very, very nice. In fact, the whole verse is enjoyable. Liked it very much. You have a great way with meter. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marge....kinda like the breezes that flow through our minds each day....bringing out the thoughts that paint our page....till the next breeze flows over us again, and again.... Lovely words....thank you... |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: You have surpassed yourself with this one. It is so outstanding! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You've done it again, Marge... A wonderful feel to this one  ~ hugs from the underground burrowLyra |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love the title Marge and I know where you're coming from....I think you know how I feel about all that....This is so pretty and invokes reflection. "Ric-rac ravels of regret for thoughts that I have not penned yet" I think we all regret that....I know you'll get them out where we all can enjoy those thoughts. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marge... A lovely poem. Through trees of wicker the wind does blow From your pin a beautiful poem does flow Life plays a gentle song from long ago... Paul |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Marvelous, an absolute delight as always! Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzDevina~ You have a wonderful move~ Thank you sweetie~ NightShade~ I'm so glad you enjoyed it~ Thanks so much~ MartieSis~ Then ... I've done us both~ You're a sweetheart~  Kethry~ I have felt the 'reflecting'~ Thank you so much dear lady~ MarshaLove~ And you are tightly stitched into my heart, dearest friend~ OhJanetMarie~ You always just 'know' ... my response BEFORE I read your reply was to attempt to explain to others how the simple pleasure of sitting outside with the gentle winds puffing through the wicker gave me little smiling thoughts~ And then glancing at the overhang on the patio I saw my Ric-Rac cactus tipping her thoughts my way ... it just continued to write itself~ Thank you lady~ ThisDiamond~ To take one back to 'Grandma's porch' is a special moment for me~ Thank you so much~ SuzieQ~ Well ... that makes TWO of us~  Be happy sweetie~ SimplyGold~ Thank you so much ... I try not to interfere with the flow of it as it comes~ I appreciate your notice of the meter~ BettyLou~ Awwwww ... you are just so wonderful to me~ Thank you~ Lyra~ I so appreciate your 'burrowed' hugs~ Be well ...  ETHome~ You are very aware of how these little tidbits of thought circle until they capture my attention~ I always hope to take time to listen as they play~ Thank you~ Paul~ You always make me feel so good for sharing with you~ Thanks ever so much~ EagleOne~ Just seeing you in the forums again is a delight to this poetess~ Thank you so much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Delicate lacing from before when all the dreams mattered more Coming to rest in feathered nest blown by sweet wickered wind~" Ah Marge... Everything you pen is is so delicate.. This is especially lovely my friend. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Such a beautiful and delicate penning Marge. This is truly one of my favs and therefore gets tucked into the box of jewels to be savored another day. Thank you for this a.m. treasure sweetie. Hugs. somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Marge this is wonderful. There are words in this poem that remind me so much of my mother and grandmother. They used to sew everything, clothes, drapes, you name it and they had the machine humming. Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Enchantress~ Thank you so much dear poetess~ It's a pleasure to share with you~ GentleSpirit~ To know you keep it is a cherished moment to me~ Thank you dear~ Marti~ Ahhhh, to stir the memory of another is my greatest delight~ Thank you my friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- I absolutely LOVE this! It is definitely one of my favorites of yours. I just love the feeling it leaves me with. Ya know...I REALLY must come read and reply more often...ya think? This one just reminded me of just how much I've been missing by not being around much. Thanks for being YOU, my friend, and for not giving up on me. Love you, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
beautiful... regards to you, Marge Sudhr |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetTrickyVicky~ Yes ... you do need to come here more often dearest friend~ Somehow I just thought you'd really enjoy the serenity in this one~ I'm so glad I was right~ Give up on you ???? Ain't NEVER gonna happen girl~ Sudhir~ Thank you for dropping in on this one too, my friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Marge, this is absolutely beautiful. I love it. ^Hugz^ Betty |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Betts~ Thanks gal ... it came so softly ... Whispering gentle thoughts to my pen~ Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
it is comforting is it not to just allow the mind to play and be carried at wind's whim? your style of writing is bound in silk strings. jeff |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhJeff~ Thank you .... then it would have to be that heart strings are made of silk~ I so apprecite you and Dulci~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LOL-ing at myself .... AND SOMETIMES I even know how to spell APPRECIATE~ And ... Jeff and Dulci ... I do~ *Huggers* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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