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smitty-j
Member

since 2002-09-13

Posts 72
Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-09-17 04:13 PM

I hear his voice it calls to me
Whenever I’m alone.
Its gentle tones caress my skin
With words he makes love known.
I feel his breath warm on my skin
Soft breeze on summer days
All words left unspoken now
More shown in deeper ways.
I see his face in dreams and wake
And long to touch his cheek.
To see in eyes reflected love
For more we’ll always seek.
I taste his kiss, its surely there
So soft and yet shows need.
We give and take, how it should be
On each others love we feed.
I feel his touch brush over me
And ache for more to come.
Our time will be and then we’ll need
The touch of only one.

Julie

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-17 04:14 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

BlueEyes
Member

since 2002-08-30

Posts 152
TX, USA

2 posted 2002-09-17 04:17 PM

smitty-j...
I must say - for having written your first poem only a month ago, you are definitely off to a great start.
Very good writing...

BlueEyes

smitty-j
Member

since 2002-09-13

Posts 72
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-09-17 04:59 PM

Thanks so much...glad you liked it
J

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2002-09-17 06:00 PM

This is so very nice. Tender and wistful and warm, I like it.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

Magician
Member

since 2002-08-14

Posts 126

5 posted 2002-09-17 06:02 PM

This leaves the reader breathless, as much as the one for whom its intended. Excellent.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2002-09-17 06:39 PM

Very soft and sensuous. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2002-09-17 08:27 PM

smitty-j - seems that you have 'the touch of only one', and it show in this very romantic write...

BC

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2002-09-17 08:35 PM

definitely seeing your romantic side here, my friend... ejoyed..

jwesley

fishop
Member

since 2002-09-13

Posts 79
ohio

9 posted 2002-09-17 09:12 PM

I thought this was very sweet. And I too feel a certain attraction to your work. You know what they say about great minds....lol.

All words left unspoken now
More shown in deeper ways.

I read your poem and re's: in the critical place and believe I may have what you desire. Fishop@aol.com

admirer
New Member

since 2002-09-18

Posts 3
Montana

10 posted 2002-09-18 08:24 AM

a month well spent...excellent

[This message has been edited by admirer (09-18-2002 08:55 AM).]

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