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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I orbit your life moving closer then farther you never reach out you’ll never have kissed my lips you’ll never know what you missed Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (09-17-2002 03:36 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Whoa!!! This is good Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
You do this soooooo well..sigh..Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssss) This is so deeply heartfelt, sweet friend, I know this feeling and hope now you have true love that surrounds your heart with warmth in destinies heliocentric theory, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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smitty-j Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 72Florida, USA |
I think I'd turn in that orbit and make a grab at ya...woohoo J |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
Wow...now that will make some girl think "what did i miss out on?" cool |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Next orbit by Canada....I'll reach out! Excellent!! Nobody does it better.... ~Hugs, Nancy Lee~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bob darling man and again you leave me with nothing to say, except this is one of your best. You can orbit me anytime darling heart. Truly this is perfect and this I shall be taking with me. This is utterly utterly special I love it love it love it utterly, the tall Texan is on a roll today, this is a first class piece, and did I mention I love it? Mmmmmm I do Love and warm stuff as always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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sean_krazy Junior Member
since 2002-09-14
Posts 33 |
well i cant say enough other than that it was a good one... peace sean (sean_krazy) |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
beautiful.... BlueEyes |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You could make Haley's comet sound romantic, but you knew that! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Interloper - grab the ring, and perhaps she will also.... BC |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ In a real tail-spin Reaching out - all directions Where is your orbit ? A light-world away from mine ? Oh ... when galaxies collide~ *HaleyHugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...never thought of it as orbiting (more like crashing and burning...ha!), but like the way you put it and enjoyed this... jwesley |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
What an orbit it would be...... like a shooting star across the sky a twinkling blush within my eye just one kiss, no not enough I love it when you write this stuff!! sorry......couldn't help myself.....first time my muse has even thought of letting me think of a few words......lol..... lol at Jimmy too....crash and burn.....been there a FEW times........ awesome write Tex! If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
very lovely.....and yet somewhat sad.... Lauren~ I need some distraction |
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