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Doug Pretorius Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 81Ontario, Canada |
Staves & Caves September 14, 2002 Copyright 2002 Doug Pretorius I'm offered up to hide the pain you've left inside not to wonder or question why tonight is what tomorrow brings blocked out by sealing rings in and out your vision fades designed the way your soul was made I offer again to lie about how you threw off your ties even as they descend on all sides no less than the whole night sings crying out to show your wings we cover our faces with handmade caves while you fly off to some other stave |
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cjohnson/poet2079 Junior Member
since 2002-07-31
Posts 35va(757) |
Doug, your words actually exposed my heart; epecially today 9/17 which will always hold a special place in my heart. Thank you for sharing, it really touched my heart!!! eyssence  eyssence |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Wonderful words, aching. Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very nicely done, Doug. It literally flies down the blue page. I can see cj really liked it too.  |
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smitty-j Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 72Florida, USA |
wonderful words...I loved it J |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Interesting word choices...the feeling of floundering in grief...well written. ThisDiamond |
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